长短句 第1篇
一、在英语写作中，长句和短句的表达效果不同，因而具有着不同的文体效果，过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好。短句是指字数不多的句子，短句的特点是易于组织和表达，随便自然，利于体现文章的速度和力度感。而英语长句的特点在于它便于表达严密的思想，缜密的逻辑和复杂的活动等等。所以，我们一定要把长句短句的优势和特点在英文写作过程中充分体现出来，而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题，例如：
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite
如此可见，长短句结合，给人的感觉干净利索，也通俗易懂，更有利于表达作者的中心思想。二、需要注意的是：根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短语，使文章显得错落有致，这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感，而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短，且先长后短;在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉，文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。例如：
At noon we had a picnic lunch in the Then we had a short Then we began to play We sang and Some told Some played
→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing
中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后，我们唱的唱歌，跳的跳舞，还有的讲笑话、下棋，大家玩得很开心。
长短句 第2篇
You are organizing a business meeting, and you should write to people from other companies and tell them the changes of the meeting (time, location, ). You will (1) explain why you have to make changes, (2) tell them the changes, and (3) apologize for the
Dear Smith,
I am writing to inform you about the changes we have made to the high-level meeting between our two
Anderson, project manager of “Sunshine Cooperation Campaign”, has been ill recently and is currently in hospital for He is recovering well but won’t be able to come back to work until 2 weeks As he is the designer and coordinator of this “sunshine campaign”, we feel the meeting could not be held without
Therefore, we are rescheduling the meeting to be held one month later, on 9 o’clock, Sunday, 15 Also the place of the meeting has been changed from Hilton Hotel to the VIP meeting room at the headquarters of our company, 100, Oxford We also might invite senior managers from Greenwell Company to attend the meeting as they have always been an active supporter of this
We are sorry for any inconvenience that the change of the meeting might have caused If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours sincerely,
Edward Simpson
长短句 第3篇
一、长句变短句
例1：将下面的句子改写成几个短句(可调整语序、适当增减词语)，做到既保留全部信息，又语言简明。(20XX年高考全国卷甲22题)
古人类学是研究化石猿猴和现代猿猴与人类的亲缘关系、劳动在从猿到人转变中的作用、人类发展过程中体质特征的变化和规律等有关人类起源和发展问题的一个分支学科。
笔者认为，做此类题可分为三步：
第一步，提取句子主干。
无论一个多么复杂的长句，它总是只有一套主谓宾，所以，面对一个复杂的长句，首先要找出句子的主干。分析这个长句的结构，很容易得出此句的主干为：古人类学是人类学的一个分支学科。
第二步，切分辅助成份。
此题的定语即研究的对象，比较复杂，需要仔细切分。研究的对象，此句中共列举了三个：
①化石猿猴和现代猿猴与人类的亲缘关系
②劳动在从猿到人转变中的作用
③人类发展过程中体质特征的变化和规律
而这三个研究对象又都从属于“人类起源和发展问题”，可见，句中列举的三个对象只是人类起源和发展问题的一部分，是举出的几个具有代表性的例子。
第三步，调整切分的语句和主干，形成有逻辑的语段。
提取切分后共得到三个句子：
①古人类学是人类学的一个分支学科。
②古人类学研究人类起源和发展问题。
③例如化石猿猴和现代猿猴与人类的亲缘关系、劳动在从猿到人转变中的作用、人类发展过程中体质特征的变化和规律等。
因①②两句的主语相同，为简明起见，我们调整时可以把放在后面的句子的主语省略或用“它”代替。参考答案为：
古人类学研究人类起源和发展问题，例如化石猿猴和现代猿猴与人类的亲缘关系、劳动在从猿到人转变中的作用、人类发展过程中体质特征的变化和规律等。它是人类学的一个分支学科。
长短句 第4篇
雅思写作技巧中，有一项是非常有效的，就是使用长短句结构。长短句结构在雅思大作文写作中的应用可以使整个文章的节奏更加明快，增加可读性。
长句和短句是就句子的字数多少、形体长短而言的。长句和短句各有其优点和缺点。长句，因为使用的定语、状语较多，限制了概念的外延，增大了概念的内涵，所以比较精确、严密，但使用起来不够活泼简便。短句，由于字数少，直截了当，一般比较简洁、明快、有力，但不利于表达复杂的语义内容。长短句结构交替使用是雅思大作文的必备技巧，这既体现了节奏上的要求，也是意义上的需要。
例如：(1)We can imagine the beautiful (2)There are many trees along the (3)There is a clean river in the (4) There are many fishes in the (5)There are willow trees on the one (6)There are some pieces of grassland on the other (7)There are many flowers on
文中七个句子都是简单句，句型结构单一，而且句子长短同一，都在七、八词左右，十分单调。
修改后的段落：(1)Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we make our cities (2)Green trees line the (3)A clean river winds through the city，in which a lot of fishes (4)On the one side stand rows of willow (5)On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red
改写后的这段文字，有长句(1)、(3)、(5)，也有短句(2)和(4)，一长一短，抑扬顿挫的节奏感就出来了。不仅句子长短交插，而且句型结构变化也很大，使文章流畅自然，生动活泼。
长短句 第5篇
不少学生害怕学文言文，觉得自己虽然花了不少精力学习，有了一定量的知识积累，但在没有老师的帮助下，独立阅读浅易文言文的能力却不强，应对考试常会感觉比较困难。其实，攻克文言文并不难，只要找对了方法。怎样学习文言文才能更有效呢?具体来说，可以按读、译、诵、析、结、练六个主要步骤进行学习。
读。学文言文一定要读，应该在理解句意和正确断句的基础上多朗读。因为文言文的语感培养很重要。
译。根据课下注释或课外资料准确、流畅地翻译课文。这样可以利用意义记忆的方式，加深对课文的理解，这样便于记忆诵。
诵。背诵是培养文言文语感的最佳方式。背诵最好的方式就是把内容分为几个组块，比方《过秦论》最后一段，共有六句话，可以分为三个组块，只要理解了意思，背下来是很容易的。
析。析就是对课文的大意、思想、人物进行挖掘。分析过程中，首先结合当时的历史背景，比方《信陵君窃符救赵》中侯赢为什么要自杀，联系当时士人的追求和立身之本，这个问题才得到合理的解释。其次，要注意古为今用。文言文教学强调加强人文教育，古为今用，同学们要对其中的故事、人物有创新的理解和评价。
结。即积累文言文基础知识。把零散的知识分为八项：通假字、活用词、特殊句式、一词多义、虚词用法、双音词古今异义、成语名句、生字生词。做一个表格，对每一课的基础知识进行总结。
练。指学完本课后为强化学生的学习效果，往往出一些题进行测试，练的环节也是必不可少的。
长短句 第6篇
WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
With the pressures on today’s young people to succeed academically, some people believe that non-academic subjects at school (eg: physical education and cookery) should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate wholly on academic
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250
What young people should study at school has long been the subject of intense debate and this is a question that certainly does not have one correct
We need to provide young people the best possible chance of doing well at In traditional curriculum there is a wide variety of subjects with a mix of academic and non-academic In this way a young person is formed with a rounded Non-academic subjects would include sports, cooking, woodwork and I believe this is the best form of A young person should learn things other than academic Sport is particularly Young people have to learn to love sport so that they can be fit and healthy later in If not we will be raising an obese and unfit
I totally understand the point of view that education is so important that students must be pushed as hard as possible to achieve their It sounds a good idea to only expose the students to academic subjects as then they can spend all of their school hours on studying areas that will get them into university and good jobs later in I just feel a more rounded education would produce a better We must remember too that a lot of people, maybe even most people, aren’t academically minded and would benefit more from a more vocationally based Forcing academic studies onto them would lead to failure and the student leaving school too
Therefore I agree that although a wholly academic curriculum would suit and benefit some young people, I believe that for most students non-academic subjects are important inclusions still in today’s
长短句 第7篇
雅思写作的题目经常重复出现，我们就以《图书馆功能》问题为例，题目为：
Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace libraries’ which extent do you agree or disagree?
从题型上来讲，这是个非常典型的“同意不同意类”的题目。在分析这个题目的时候大家应该注意分析其题眼所在。整个题目是一个因果关系的命题，即“因为电脑科技可以替代公共图书馆的功能，所以花钱维护公共图书馆是一种浪费钱的举动”。考生需要论证自己同意或者不同这个命题。在仔细分析后我们不难发现这个命题有两条主线： 因果关系是否成立; 电脑科技是否能够取代公共图书馆。一篇好的文章因该将上述两条主线都要提到，这样子才能保证有较高的文章解析程度。
在分析好题目之后大家就可以开始谋篇布局了。一般来讲常见的雅思作文段落结构有两种，即我们所常见的“五段式”或者“四段式”。
所谓的“五段式”是指Introduction和Conclusion各写一段，然后文章主体部分用三个理由段落来论证自己观点。
所谓的“四段式”就是指主体段落只用两个理由段落来论证。
两种分段方法都有其优势所在。
“五段式”结构层次感强，作者表态更鲜明有力。
“四段式”更加容易操作，客观分析论题的正反两面所以容易组织思路。
大家应该学会根据题目和自己的习惯来选择。例如本次考试的文章，下面分别给出其“五段式”和“四段式”的布局结构供大家参考：
四段式：
第一段 引言：描述题目背景，提出观点。
第二段 主线一：不否认电脑科技可以替代公共图书馆的一部分功能。
第三段 主线二：但是公共图书馆作为社会生活的一部分有其不可替代性。
第四段 总结：综上所述，花钱维护公共图书馆不是一种浪费钱的行为。
例文outline：
Maintaining public libraries is not a waste of money since computer technology can replace libraries’ function….
We can not deny that computer technology can replace certain function of library, such as…, because…
But as a necessary part of our social life, public library can not replace by computer technology in the following aspects….
All in all, maintaining public libraries is not a waste of money since computer technology can replace libraries’
五段式：
第一段 引言：描述题目背景，提出观点。
第二段 主线一：公共图书馆作为社会生活的一部分有其不可替代性之一。
第三段 主线一：公共图书馆作为社会生活的一部分有其不可替代性之二。
第四段 主线二：不否认电脑科技可以取代公共图书馆的一部分功能，但远远不足以完全取代其社会地位。
第五段 总结：综上所述花钱维护公共图书馆不是一种浪费钱的行为。
例文outline：
Maintaining public libraries is not a waste of money since computer technology can replace libraries’ function….
Firstly, as a necessary part of our social life, public library can not replace by computer technology, since… (reason 1)
Secondly, as a necessary part of our social life, public library can not replace by computer technology, because… (reason 2)
At last but not least, we can not deny computer technology can replace certain aspects of public library, but there is still a long way to go for it to replace public library completely….
In a word, maintaining public libraries is not a waste of money since computer technology can replace libraries’
从上面的结构中我们可以看到，题目中的两条主线都有详细的文字进行论述，这样一来考生的文章析题程度(Task Response)的分数就会相对较高。而如果文章一直在论证电脑科技能否取代图书馆的话就会有些偏题，分数相对也会受到一定的影响。
长短句 第8篇
雅思写作大作文要写好，除了自己的写作功底，那么拿高分审题也是关键的一步，在为大家推荐该篇雅思写作大作文范文的同时，也为大家进行了详细的针对于该篇范文的解析，希望大家从这样一个案例中找到雅思写作的关键点，然后下一个雅思大作文范文说不定就出自你手了。
题目：旅游到一个别的国家，游客是否必须入乡随俗，同时放弃自己的文化?
审题：这样的题目，分析是关键。自己的习俗和异国文化习俗是否必然矛盾冲突呢?这是突破点。根据这个进行分类，进行二分法阐述。如果文化冲突比较显著，就最好入乡随俗，否则可以保持自己的习俗。课堂提问，什么是文化?预料之中，几乎没有人能够回答出来。因为这些学生回答问题不是通过大脑思考，而是想在自己大脑储存——他们虽然没有任何储存——中搜寻记忆的答案。这是中国学生最显著的特征。多年教室的蹂躏，早已使得他们完全丧失思考以及说人话的能力。
推荐范文：
What is a culture? Although there is no an agreement about the definitionof culture, people generally consider it to be the ways people eat, play, dress, drink, think, and When one person travels in a foreign country, the foreign culture is not necessarily completely incompatiblewith his or her native Therefore, it is not always true to do in Rome as a Roman
If one travels in a public culture, that is, where the social order, economic and other relationships between people are maintained by laws rather than by custom or kinship, it is safe for the traveler to do things in his or her own ways，because the public culture welcomes different or even conflict opinions, people, and Take New York, the big pot, as a typical case in In this city everybody has an angle and everyone has the right to do whatever delights him or her in cast that it is not
If one travels in a folk culture, however, it is better to do in Rome as Romans A folk culture is a culture featured by clans, kinships, and In a folk culture different ways of doing things are less In such a culture, if one remains his or her own ways of doing things, hardly can he or she be able to enjoy the Worse, the traveler might be in the deep troubled
Therefore, whether one must follow the new ways of doing things and whether one must keep the native culture depend on a variety of specific
范文解析：这篇雅思大作文写作范文采用先分后总的文章结构，清晰明了，范文中所运用的长短句的搭配是值得大家学习和借鉴的，同时一些小词组和词汇也运用的敲恰到好处。
通过该篇雅思大作文范文的案例分析，希望大家能够知道如何进行审题，如何安排自己的文章结构，以及如何在文章中巧妙的加入一些连接词和修饰词，当然，这样的目标并不是一朝一夕就立马可以实现的，还是希望大家平时多看多练。
长短句 第9篇
长短句原则
写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题：
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite
如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉?牢记!
强烈建议：在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短，且先长后短;在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
